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	<title>Comments on: P.U. Why That Web Article Stinks&#8230;</title>
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		<title>By: Cut! How to Shorten Your Web Articles &#124; Article Writing Tips</title>
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		<dc:creator>Cut! How to Shorten Your Web Articles &#124; Article Writing Tips</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 17 Oct 2009 16:39:24 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] Leave a Comment    A recent commenter here at FWJ wrote she was having trouble making the transition to web articles from traditional print. Writing for the web is significantly different as I pointed out in &#8220;P.U.! Why that Web Article Stinks.&#8221; [...]</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] Leave a Comment    A recent commenter here at FWJ wrote she was having trouble making the transition to web articles from traditional print. Writing for the web is significantly different as I pointed out in &#8220;P.U.! Why that Web Article Stinks.&#8221; [...]</p>
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		<title>By: Terreece</title>
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		<dc:creator>Terreece</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Oct 2008 15:12:58 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hana - Thanks and you&#039;re right on the short, goofy paragraphs. I see that a lot on homemade websites.

Shirley - The flip side of learning something - you forget other stuff! No, seriously it&#039;ll come back to you. But like I said on FWJ radio the other day, I go back to my Idiot&#039;s Guide to Magazine Writing from time to time to focus on the basics. It&#039;s like going back to the barre for the ballet dancer.

Phil - I remember thinking back when USA Today was getting a lot slack that it was the best paper to read while in between classes and during lunch and the NYTimes was better suited for at home, in a comfy chair for the long haul. And now look - short attention spans have won the day. Wait, is that a good thing or bad thing? :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hana &#8211; Thanks and you&#8217;re right on the short, goofy paragraphs. I see that a lot on homemade websites.</p>
<p>Shirley &#8211; The flip side of learning something &#8211; you forget other stuff! No, seriously it&#8217;ll come back to you. But like I said on FWJ radio the other day, I go back to my Idiot&#8217;s Guide to Magazine Writing from time to time to focus on the basics. It&#8217;s like going back to the barre for the ballet dancer.</p>
<p>Phil &#8211; I remember thinking back when USA Today was getting a lot slack that it was the best paper to read while in between classes and during lunch and the NYTimes was better suited for at home, in a comfy chair for the long haul. And now look &#8211; short attention spans have won the day. Wait, is that a good thing or bad thing? <img src='http://www.freelancewritinggigs.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>By: Phil</title>
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		<dc:creator>Phil</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Oct 2008 14:53:46 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Even writing in print requires much of what you mention, unless writing for a scholarly journal. USA Today, which many journalists (including myself) ridiculed for years, has definitely changed the face of writing, long before the Internet. The Chicago Tribune just went to a &quot;non-jump&quot; philosophy to make reading the paper easier.

The first newspaper I worked at -- 30 years ago -- had the philosophy way back then.

I even get frustrated with books that have lengthy paragraphs, because it gives me no natural stopping point (I read on the train, during commercials, etc.).</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Even writing in print requires much of what you mention, unless writing for a scholarly journal. USA Today, which many journalists (including myself) ridiculed for years, has definitely changed the face of writing, long before the Internet. The Chicago Tribune just went to a &#8220;non-jump&#8221; philosophy to make reading the paper easier.</p>
<p>The first newspaper I worked at &#8212; 30 years ago &#8212; had the philosophy way back then.</p>
<p>I even get frustrated with books that have lengthy paragraphs, because it gives me no natural stopping point (I read on the train, during commercials, etc.).</p>
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		<title>By: Shirley Anderson</title>
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		<dc:creator>Shirley Anderson</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Oct 2008 02:59:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I agree whole-heartedly with everything you&#039;ve mentioned in your post.

About two years ago, I made the switch from print to online writing.  It was a bit of an adjustment, and took some research on my part to figure out what changes I needed to make.  Funny thing is, now that I want to write for both mediums, I feel like I need a refresher course on crafting longer paragraphs without keywords and fewer bullets.

Great post!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I agree whole-heartedly with everything you&#8217;ve mentioned in your post.</p>
<p>About two years ago, I made the switch from print to online writing.  It was a bit of an adjustment, and took some research on my part to figure out what changes I needed to make.  Funny thing is, now that I want to write for both mediums, I feel like I need a refresher course on crafting longer paragraphs without keywords and fewer bullets.</p>
<p>Great post!</p>
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		<title>By: hana</title>
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		<dc:creator>hana</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 30 Sep 2008 23:55:52 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Sometimes keyword-dense articles give me a headache. 

I agree that bullets and short paragraphs are the way to go. On the flip side, a series of bullets that aren&#039;t fleshed out or super-short paragraphs are also hard to read (or take seriously). 

Anyways - great article! Keep up the good work.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sometimes keyword-dense articles give me a headache. </p>
<p>I agree that bullets and short paragraphs are the way to go. On the flip side, a series of bullets that aren&#8217;t fleshed out or super-short paragraphs are also hard to read (or take seriously). </p>
<p>Anyways &#8211; great article! Keep up the good work.</p>
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